Life now is better than it was 100 years ago.
People who argue that few vintages ago are worse than now realize advancement quality of life. It is preferable in some sectors such as health, education, and vacancy.
Nowadays, people are easy getting health treatment that supported by high technology, where at the past, people faced difficulties in operating methods. For instance, operating conjoined twins was as extraordinary phase and it still has big risk for the result. But it is different now, which it backs with experts, excellent equipments, and has a quite fear.
Poor condition of education at the past, where people, especially women, have a little chance for inflated coaching because there is discrimination between men and women. Women suggested to early marriage than continued their study and it was forced by their tradition that assumed men were higher than women. Since globalization effect influences people` mindset, there is balance dare both them, so they could reach their expectation.
Competition of posting is totally different between now and past because it is required completely skills. Instead, people attempt improving their ability with some courses such as, computer, and foreign languages. It is for people interact with global issues, which it holds mainly sector in advancement country. Although people have dominance capability, it does not mean that they could be effortless acquiring jobs because there are many people could hold the common skills. According to expert, quality of people at the past is more excellent than now because people distracted mind by technology. It perhaps that technology helping people in their daily, but it creates them spoiled doing activity.
In brief, there are positive and negative sides between past and now because it transfers effect to people. But level of life makes differences that felt by people, so some of them prefer to choose the comfort life.
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