Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss
Globalization is a well-known topic which draw both the benefits and the drawbacks on nation's economies. The issue is not entirely straight forward, although some arguments can also be made against the idea. In this essay, the debate will be discussed and given a concluding view.
On the one hand, it can be said that Globalization promote the idea of free movement of good and services. This can help the firms to setup their manufacturing units in developing country, which can help corporations to reduce the cost and increase the profit. In addition to this, new job opportunities can be created in local market. For instance, a recent study by the IMF shows that 70% of jobs are transferred to developing nations.
Secondly, this can help businesses to cater the needs of the local people while providing goods at affordable prices in comparison to current market price. Furthermore, It also improves the standard of living of the economy.
However, the opponents point out their view that, perhaps the major factor is Outsourcing. This leads to shutdown of factories in Industrial nation's. As a result, many individuals get laid off from their current job. Many people claim that these numbers have increased the unemployment percentage from 6% to 8%.
Finally, Unhygienic and poor working conditions in the factory can have a catastrophic effect not only on their physical skin but also on internal health.
To Conclude, Government can introduce some rules and regulations in the labor law to protect the interest of individuals while ensuring the safety and compliance standards to be followed by every firm operating on that land.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-28 | D87eepak | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-09 | preet kaur | 84 | view |
| 2019-07-09 | preet kaur | 78 | view |
| 2019-06-29 | dha | 89 | view |
| 2019-06-17 | jaski2k | 84 | view |
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and 56
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a freind who lives there for some help.Write a letter to this freind. In your lettergive details of your study planexplain why you w 84
- Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation. 84
- Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. 89
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...d and services. This can help the firms to setup their manufacturing units in developing...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: GOT_SHUTDOWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to shut down'?
Suggestion: to shut down
...major factor is Outsourcing. This leads to shutdown of factories in Industrial nations. As ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.156133829 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88451882652 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7774168062 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0556577049621 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203993559179 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289874333826 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0270455698383 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331435362085 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.