In the modern era, vast of people join the sports activities and enjoy them. Youngsters are easily alluring the latest sports game, even though some of activities and game perilous for a human being, people are participating in the event. The reasons for the people are tempted to dangerous activities as describe in forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, some people are passionate about doing dangerous work. They always accept the harmful daring, and they thought that this dare brings happiness of their life. For example, one of my classmate always keen to go mountain and hiking without worn any safety tool, he dared to go the steeped mountain which is one of the dangerous mountain in India. I asked him why he took the risk in your life; he told me that I feel happy and energetic after hiking.
Secondly, many people do dangerous work for earning money because of a low-income family, children education and financial problem. For instance, in India, I saw in the huge carnival that well of death in which motorcyclists and drivers of miniature automobile travel along the vertical and perform stunts, held in place by friction and centrifugal force, they take this risk for earning money, and these are one sort of the job for them.
Lastly, many of people act as dangerous activities because of going away from monotonous work. In modern technology turns people life into machinery frame in which every person have a hectic schedule in daily work. In such of work, people are enjoying to some dangerous activities such as high jumping and flying as kites to get the fresh feeling. Also, depress people are most engage the perilous activities because of the not concern about their life and they want to changes their life.
In sum up, people are attracted to dangerous sports and activities because of passionate of that kind of activities, to make money and feel fresh and energetic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the activities') or simply say ''some activities''.
Suggestion: some of the activities; some activities
...ing the latest sports game, even though some of activities and game perilous for a human being, pe...
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Line 4, column 470, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'change'.
Suggestion: change
...ncern about their life and they want to changes their life. In sum up, people are att...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93125 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52784493195 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540625 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9135527475 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257955552864 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107587493898 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787050346889 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153881279357 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606866168036 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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