The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.
What are your opinions on this?
In recent years, there is growing recognition that internet has permeated into nearly all parts of our social lives and made considerable alterations. However, impact of this trend is a source of constant debate. Some people believe that the merits of internet will still continue to outweigh its negative influences while others oppose this perspective. Yet to the best of my knowledge, the internet has been able to gain inseparable stance in our lives.
At first it is important to note that the term ‘internet’ is now stands for ‘connection’. It is not a secret that human beings are c...
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.032 0.07
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Characters: 1512 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.178 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.059 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.065 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.032 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5