Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Money became an inherent and essential part of our life today. Nowadays people can buy whether they want and spend money on desirable things. Although, some people are accomplished to enjoy money while earning, personally, I prefer invest my money for the future, because I am sure it will bring more valuable return.
First of all, I try to save my money, because this way I can buy the one I really need even if it is quite expensive. Travelling is a kind of thing I am fond of, but very often it requires a lot of money, especially if I travel abroad. The only outcome from this situation is to build my budget for future trips by saving money beforehand.
Moreover, the money which I saved may be spent with cleverness in the future. I remember myself amassing my money for future education. I dreamed to enter the university in another city that was far away from my home. To study there it was necessary to pay not only for my education, but also for a flat, textbooks and food there.
One more thing is that saving money helps me to avoid spending it on senseless purchases. I have a habit to buy a lot of clothes spontaneously. And the problem is that I do not wear it later. Saving money, I feel the value of my money. Also, I see how difficult it to accumulate and how quickly money usually can be spent on silly products.
Thus, there is another approach which is spending money while earning it; I am used to another way. Saving my money allows me to spend it on things I need, to spend on expensive things I cannot afford at once, and this way I may manage money in a more proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, thus, while, i feel, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37333333333 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46883688314 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3860500285 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1764705882 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212367627124 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781061034417 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540414924675 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130667303143 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126429085712 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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