The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
Charts showed describe the results of a survey of adult education. The bar chart illustrates some factors why adults want to study. The second chart shows the people’ ways to manage their children’s education cost.
According to the first chart, the most influence factor is that they interest in subject as well as want to gain qualifications. However, these reasons are slight different, 40% and 38% respectively. Then, meeting other people and changing jobs are the lowest factor, 9% and 12% respectively.
Afterwards, three other reasons including helping for current job, improving prospects of promotion, and enjoying studying, have no significant difference, 22%, 20%, and 20% respectively. Furthermore, pie chart indicates that people share the costs of adult education including taxpayer (25%), employer (35%), and individual (40%).
From both of pictures, it can be clearly concluded that interesting in subject and achieving competencies are the most factors influencing adult to study. Then, almost people pay their children’ education fee individually.
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Sentence: According to the first chart, the most influence factor is that they interest in subject as well as want to gain qualifications.
Description: The word interest is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to interest
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to as and want
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 9
No. of Words: 160 200
No. of Characters: 858 900
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.557 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.362 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.927 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.848 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.631 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4