Dear Mr. Smith,
I am sorry for the noise from my house last Saturday. All inconveniences caused are greatly regreted. I hope you can accept my apology and forgive my misbehave. I am sincerely grateful that you wrote to me regarding this matter.
Last Saturday, I was holding a party with several friends in my house. We had barbecue and enjoyed some beer; afterward, we sat down and chated while tasting Chinese red tea. I am terrible sorry about the noise from our activities. I utterly understand your discontent because I also appreciate the tranquility of the neighborhood.
I promise you that incidents like this will never happen again. I will never hold a party in my house because of the inevitable noise from it. Thank you again for your bringing this issue up via letter.
Yours sincerely,
Jim pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the tranquility of the neighborhood. I promise you that incidents like this wi...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ents like this will never happen again. I will never hold a party in my house bec...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89285714286 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72848728367 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692857142857 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2421109461 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.0833333333 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270754112893 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917026139539 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724778065435 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162812511793 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693766753223 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.