It is commonly thought, the advent of technology and internet is a big step through our century. definitely the technology has brought more convenient to our life, specially cyber technology has able us to access the enormous information and knowledge in any field such as medicine, politics, social, sport, art and so on. As everyone can access to the internet with minimum of equipment in every place so it would be attracts more fans in our society gradually.
In addition some devices like Cellphones, TV, Tablets are going to be significant part of our life. beside all advantages of these invents if anybody could not control the situation it would alter the fundamental of families and communication to isolate them from the society in the fallowing years.
Even there is a threat for the people who do not able to manage the time of working with these devises so it would be caused of gaining weight and to be face with some diseases which is the big obstacle for mankind.
as a result, if the people do not attention to their aspects of their life style and keep going with this situation the society would be affected by massive unsolved problems.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 71
- Throughout history, people have dreamed about perfect society, but they have not agreed what an ideal society is. What do you think the most important elements to have perfect society in the modern world? How people can achieve an ideal society? 56
- What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching television? Discuss both sides. 61
- Agree/ disagree. the automobile is destroying our quality of life. 56
- Nowadays,the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Definitely
...rnet is a big step through our century. definitely the technology has brought more conveni...
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...s more fans in our society gradually. In addition some devices like Cellphones...
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Suggestion: addition,
... fans in our society gradually. In addition some devices like Cellphones, TV, Table...
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Suggestion: Beside
...ing to be significant part of our life. beside all advantages of these invents if any...
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...significant part of our life. beside all advantages of these invents if anybody c...
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Suggestion: As
...ch is the big obstacle for mankind. as a result, if the people do not attentio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80597014925 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63733215636 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5880992965 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871413717319 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383913052768 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362625819369 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560476223884 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394815851296 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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