Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This has can lead a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. Which problems do children face when going online without parents supervision? How can these problems be solved?
Due to the developing of technology, it seems that children can easily access the internet to communicate with people without any supervision and this can cause a serious consequence to young children's life. This essay will first discuss one of the main problems which associated with being cheated by bad people and then will suggest a viable solution.
The principle problem with giving freedom for kids to joining the social network is they can be benefited by someone who has badly purpose. There is a reason to think that evildoers also use the internet as a tool to searching and approaching their target such as young children. Moreover, kids are immature and inexperienced classifying good or bad people. They easily believe in what people said without any doubt. For example, some thieves try to make friend with young children through Facebook with a good profile to get the trust, then they ask for the address to and living habits of the family to plan for the robbery.
A solution for this worrying problem is parents have to pay attention to their kids and control the way they using the internet. Parents should ask their children to carefully make friend with strange people. Moreover, they should use software to control their kids' accessing to internet. For instance, some new softwares allow people checking the history of last using such as what website have been going or what people chatting in some social network.
In conclusion, one of the main problems with free accessing internet of young children can be solved through controlling software. It is predicted that more and more software will be created to help parents know what their kids doing with the computer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'purposed'.
Suggestion: purposed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00704225352 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51029421942 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6818169775 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361629678482 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128700776165 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911695903431 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237855981106 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408778818616 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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