The reading states that an old fossil structure that have been found inside 200-million-years-old was not created by bees and provides three reasons of supports. The professor, however, explains that the arguments are not convincing and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that no fossil remains of actual bees have been found that time. The professors opposes this point by saying that not finding fossils at that time does not mean that bees were not exist at that time. She says that trees are rare 200 million years but they are later.
Second, the reading states that thereare some doubts because of the absence of beeowering planets in that period. The professor refutes this point by saying that some bees use non-flowering foods. She says that bees feed on non-flowering poutry. Also, she mentions that befor existing flowering planet on the Earth there were some bees.
Third, the reading states that the fossilized structures found in Arizona are somewhat similar to nest chambers made by modern bees, they lack some of the finer details on bees'nests. The professor contends that analyze of chemical compostion shows that the fossil relates to modern bees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'oppose'.
Suggestion: oppose
...ve been found that time. The professors opposes this point by saying that not finding f...
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Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...t time does not mean that bees were not exist at that time. She says that trees are r...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...chambers made by modern bees, they lack some of the finer details on beesnests. The profess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11224489796 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5542020975 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7726999234 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0765897196687 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031908679689 0.0996497079465 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243950788961 0.0662205650399 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462717896141 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221188367434 0.0443174109184 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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