Email has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive.
Do the advantages of using email outweigh the advantages?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant eveidence. Write at least 250 words.
Some people repute that E-mail has had a great contribution on both natural and legal persons, however this contribution has been positive likewise adwerse.
The primar an advantage of E-mails is revolutionised communication. People can keep in touch with the help of electronic mail by using various kinds of electronical gismos. It gives a chance for different faces to chat with their relatives or official mates whenever and wherever they want. Furthermore, at present, this type of software is more improved and included the option of video messaging which is becoming common for busin...
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please, take an accaunt that I'm non native speaker))