The statement which young people today are not influential with important decisions which determine the future of society attracted much social concern. Different people possess different opinions toward this perspective. Personally, I agree with this statement.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is the immaturity. The fact is that, young people are usually unsophisticated. They lack needed experience and vision in order to decide important things therefore their decisions may cause erractic consequences. More importantly, their viewpoints are not consistent and easily affected by others. Maybe they have a opinion today but are likely to change it tomorrow whereas fundamental decisions need consistence in thinking. Indeed, immaturity is the explanation for the young' lack of influence on important decisions.
In the second place, priority in studying is another essential factor when considering the essence. It widely known that, in many country, young people' main concentration is learning. They are always busy with lectures, assignments, problems, tests and so on. They have to endeavor to get a place in university, to graduate and to get a good job in the future. Hence, they have little time to concern about society problems, it leads to the less influence on social things. By and large, priority in learning is the feature which constraint the affection of young people.
Last but not least, temptation from technology is what cannot be left out when considering the essence. It is well noted that, there are a lot of forms of recreation more than before such as Facebook, Instagram, movies and so on. Instead of reading newspapers or participating political or social discusses, young people nowadays spend significant time for surfing web, chatting, playing. For that reason, they are more egocentric, only caring for themselves and lack of interest with social circumstance. With no doubt, their influences on society decline on account of affection of technology.
In summary, immaturity, priority in studying, temptation from technology are convincing reasons why young people today have no influence on decisions which determined society.
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- TPO-32 - Integrated Writing Task Starting in the 1960s and continuing until the 1980s, sailors in Russian submarines patrolling the North Alantic and Arctic Ocean would occasionally hear strange sounds. These underwater noises reminded the submarine crews 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ily affected by others. Maybe they have a opinion today but are likely to change ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, in summary, no doubt, such as, by and large, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51785714286 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99091002881 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3932115252 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2857142857 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241882292249 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681606137273 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710096369822 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152789157422 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689375018003 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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