Is the society too dependent on technology?
In recent years, technology has been playing an essential role in human life because of a numerous smart features that facilitate people to survive. Therefore, people stick to modern tools frequently.
To begin with, people spend too much time on smart devices such as iphone, laptop, ipad,.. for different purposes: studying, working, entertainment,.. In fact , since there are thousand of entertaining shows, movies, music at disposal,.. people are highly engaged most of time. Thus, people are more and more sensitive to obesity or short-sighted,… which are menace to human health. Besides, people are more likely to lose important contacts and might even forget another because of its functions that able users keep contacts online regardless to the distance.
In addition, not only smart devices, society is passive due to a lot of modern equipment such as: washing machines, hoovers,.. .Contrary to last century , people have to do everything by hands: cooking, setting fire, cleaning houses, for instance. Owing to its convenience, people are lazier than they used to be. As a result, the soft-skills in daily life are deprived.
In conclusion, although technological devices would have a variety of positive impacts on the society, modern tools contributes to broad-beased benefits for human life if they are used plausibly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43269230769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94659956214 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4670326556 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9230769231 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780805358513 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209443867211 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316319462423 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453644704113 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117959873243 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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