The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
The diagram illustrates the artificial linear process of producing and preparing the coffee source that is supplied for supermarkets and shops in order to be provided their customers.
It is clear from the picture that there are 11 stages in this process, which starts with picking the coffee by hands and ends with packaging the well-prepared coffee into jars.
After raw coffee beans being harvested, they are dried naturally by the sun. The beans then be roasted before a quick cooling step. In the next step, they are grinded and poured into hot water. After being mixed, the mixture is grained then be set in freezing period. The process continues with grinding the frozen liquid before using a vacuum as a tool to dry it. At the the final stage of this process, jars are used to pack the final product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... using a vacuum as a tool to dry it. At the the final stage of this process, jars are u...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... using a vacuum as a tool to dry it. At the the final stage of this process, jars are u...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78014184397 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36734996523 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645390070922 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4642957917 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139799945263 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535076304291 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090981943594 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131244039964 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108246304922 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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