The article discusses the odds sounds, which so-called quackers, that have been heard by Russian submarine, which was patrolling the North Alantic and Arctic Ocean during 1960 to 1980. And provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states that there are many debates about the real cause of sound quackers and she refutes each of author’s reasons.
First, the reading states that the strange nosies were actually calls of ocra whales to attract mates. The professor refutes this point by stating that its true that ocra population were living at that area, but they live near the surface of the ocean. And yet, she says that submarine sailing are deep in oceans, therefore, they would not be able to hear ocra whales sounds or detect by sonar.
Second, the article posits that the sounds were caused by giant squid and it was difficult to detect by sonar because these giant marine are boneless and soft bodies. On the other hand, the professor explains that if the sounds were really caused by giant squid, the sounds would not disappear completely after two decades of being heard. For a reason is that, giant squid were always live there and continue to live there, so there is no reason to stop hearing the sounds.
Third, the reading claims that the Russian submarines were picking up sounds from secretly military submarines from another country patrolling in that area. The professor opposes this point by explaining submarines technology do not posses any technology that promote submarine to move or change directions so quickly. In addition to, submarines have noises from their engines. She concludes their is no submarine in the world posses silent engines and move so fast.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver, the professor states that there are many debates about the real cause of sou...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ocra population were living at that area,but they live near the surface of the ocean...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...sises from their engines. She concludes their is no submarine in the world posses sil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06382978723 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32765698134 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2279402294 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516302246996 0.272083759551 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177883553889 0.0996497079465 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809402757213 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279983401792 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512543595036 0.0443174109184 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.