As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work,job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Nowadays everyone want to work for achieving in something, for good life. Especially adults spend most time at work for getting more money and maintaining his or her family. Thats why, job satisfaction is more important thing at work life.
Job satisfaction play more important role because one hand if work doesn't content worker he willn't be good at work, he'll feel boring, another hand employer will stay in bad condition. If work doesn't satisfy you, your mood will be bad and it will affect your work, therefore you willn't approach to your work with interest. This situation not only impact you, but also the rating of company.
Various kinds of factors can help to job satisfaction, for example, salary. High salary can contribute to high your motivation, because you willn't hove problem with money. Certainly it will influence to job satisfaction. Another example, employer can minimize work hours and it can support workers to rest normal.
Undoubtly, all wokers expect high salary from their employers, despite that they must think about the capacity and the budget of company. Inquestionably, nobody wants to work more than normal or do heavy work, though everyone must take it in consideration it isn't easy to earn money. Employers want to pay little, however, whereas workers want high salary. Thus workers must adapt to this system and must be more realistic about job satisfaction.
In conclusion, people must think they only can achieve in success with working and money isn't given anyone like prize. Although they must demand their rights, however, they mustn't argue everything
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