TPO-27-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's progressive world, everything changes rapidly and all human experience a huge advancement and improvement in several fields of science and engineering. In fact, they have to try hard to reach the success and improve their financial status. When it comes to the chance to get a secure job, controversy surrounds the issue of whether people should take it instantly or wait for a better opportunity which would be more satisfying. I am of the opinion that people ought to consider their interests when selecting a job because it may stimulate their potential abilities to help them work productively. The following explanation will further elaborate on my perspective.
To begin with, people should always take their interests in selecting their career. Reaching success in a career is a challenging task, and it requires not only a careful management but also an impetus to continue your plan even in tough situations. In fact, all human need motivation to perform well in what they are working. Hence, we have to choose our jobs with a large attention to our interests in order to run it successfully. My father, for instance, were given a chance to get a secure job. Although he did not like that job, he had to take it because he was running a life with a wife and two children. As a result, he could not promote in his job due to the lack of enthusiasm and motivation to force him toward better positions.
Another remarkable aspect of the ongoing topic which needs to be reflected is that if you get a secure job and do not like it, it would be a waste of time. When you accept responsibility, you have to give your best to represent your liability. However, if you find that this job is not suitable for you, searching for another job would be timely and costly matter. In fact, to be successful in something, people need to adjust to it and learn the fundamental requirements to be a professional. For example, when I was first recruited as a mathematics teacher, it took my ten months to be specialized how to represent in front of my students. Meanwhile, because of my enthusiasm for another career, I changed my job. I gave my two years to get used to performing well in my new job, but If I had continued my previous job, I would not have to allocate this amount of time.
Paradoxically, finding a secure job, today, is a difficult task because big companies rarely accept new employees and if it happened, you should take it right away. By the development of the technology, companies are looking for talented employees to perform their jobs better. Thus, since there is a great competition in a job-market between regular employees with the limited professional skill to get the job, we ought to get it immediately.
Taking into consideration all the aspects mentioned above, I am pretty convinved that there are several solid reasons to support the idea that people should wait and select the more satisfying job. Not only would they have enough motivation to work efficiently but also they could save their time by not searching for the suitable job numerous times. On the other hand, finding a job today is a significant problem for all people and if they happen to be one of the lucky one to get thid opportunity, they should not miss it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2696.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 573.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70506108202 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8420688478 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479930191972 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 858.6 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7824886099 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.84 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.92 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.12 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390236355925 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107757761411 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727735587516 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223827221213 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349205641801 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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