In this modern era of twenty-first century, external appearance plays remarkable role to an extent, especially when appearing for an interview or attending some special family ocasssions. Further, some people prefer making friends that have appealing appearance but, when it comes to judgement, in my opinion, physical or external appearance is the least to be focused on because, someone said book cannot be judged by it's cover. Similarly, appearances cannot put people on test to be judged. Among plentitude of reason in support of this assertion, below mentioned are few to be taken into consideration.
First key aspect is that people are judged by their work and their deeds, whereas, physical appearance is to very little importance. History has been a proof on accounting all great people, most of them as presented were not good at appearance but have definately been successful in creating everlasting impact. For instance, Napolean Bonapart, was short statured with less appealing external appearance, yet he conquered many kingdoms. Hence, appearance contributes negligible in contributing towards judgement of people.
Second important factor to be taken into account is, judging someone on the basis of external or physical appearance might proove to be a great loss at the other end of person judging; because, a person good at few traits might not look good but definately be an expert in his field which might proove beneficial to the entire society. And, if we reject such talent in the first place then it might kill the real talent, setting wrong example towards people striving for acceptance with talent. For example, Steve Jobs, as everyone knows is one of the most enormous and examplified personality in the world, his work spoke much than a good appealing external personality of a person. His physique has failed to restrict him in excelling his work and world honours such a personality with ample amount of proud. Consequently, we must spur the talent within, focus on work and deeds of person instead of appearance.
Thirdly, good appearance can be a betrayal or bait sometimes. As an example, Hitler, someone that history remembers as one of the most brutal person ever existed on earth and not even his good appearance can enforce someone to accept him as a good person. Therefore, we must avoid any kind of judgement untill and unless we have not seen the inner side of that person.
The factors stated above asserts the idea stated in first paragraph, and hence I restate that person should never be judged based on external appearance because, sooner or later it will fade with time and only works or deeds of person will be remembered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08390022676 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73218824529 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6698058105 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.882352941 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9411764706 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131736257324 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429513608906 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390106752131 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798291215864 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379075401381 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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