Some people believe that the best way to spend a holiday in a foreign country is to go out to meet people instead of staying in the hotel most of the time. what is your opinion? give reasons and include relevant examples from your own experience.
Traveling abroad for passing leisure time has become a fashion in today's busy world. Various countries offer different kinds of opportunities for travelers. As many visitors try to come out of their routine work, they may pass their time by staying in a hotel room and enjoy their time. I believe that meeting with new people in a new place can be a good experience. They are not only capable of sharing information about their culture and customs but also about other attractive facts which can be attractive for a travel lover.
Primarily, moving to a new country for recreation can open the eyes of knowledge which enables him or her to explore more about the various facts such as people, religions, food, literature, natural beauty etc. To utilize traveling time properly it is important to find out the real beauty of the places we will visit. A local person is very much aware about this fact so they can provide assistance in this regard. By this practice it will be possible to establish global communication. Generally in a multicultural country, a visitor can see or meet people of different community which will be valuable asset for them. From country to country, food habit is different, for example, in India people like to have more spicy food but in Japan, people love to have half boiled food. so these experience will be gather from here.
On the other hand, people have different kinds of demands or choices. Many hotels offer various recreational instruments for the travelers, for example, cultural programs, food festivals, sports programs to create attractions where one can go and refresh their mind. Those who want to get a free space and try to keep themselves aloof from outer world these hotels can be useful.
To conclude, to get the real essence of traveling it is important to meet with native people and visit attractive places rather than passing time at hotels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 781, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
..., people love to have half boiled food. so these experience will be gather from he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87654320988 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59170325722 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0277511157 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139902732092 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491851392951 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388002702471 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918577264615 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140054393192 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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