Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Do you agree or not?
Advertising is an essential part of modern business today, companies advertise to introduce their new and improved products to the customers. However, it has many pros and cons to the society, such as people buy few products they do not need. Despite this fact, I agree that advertisements give us knowledge about new products which not only increase our alternative options, but also may improve our lifestyle and productivity as well.
Firstly, business needs to market their products they manufacture through advertisements. Advertising makes people aware of new and enhanced products and motivates people to buy it.
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| 2020-01-04 | muhammad Junaid | 56 | view |
| 2019-12-20 | camp.vandna@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-20 | camp.vandna@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-15 | smiley | 61 | view |
| 2019-10-29 | Violet Osueke | 78 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 528.0 1615.20841683 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 97.0 315.596192385 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44329896907 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.13828899271 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01009743641 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731958762887 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 164.7 506.74238477 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8316457104 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367953660753 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176945771154 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711529533202 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277020922948 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882994656311 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.