A conscious parenting is on increasing compares to the past among modern society. Therefore, to have a good child rearing skills, moderniseling with classes like child-care courses for parents ought to be the excellent choice. I completely agree with the statement that parents should be trained in order to improve their parenting quality.
To begin with, it is true to certain extent that our parents brought up us without parenting classes. To explain further, every parent learns their parenting skills from their own parents by selecting or eradicating the skills what they have experienced. For example, some people stated that they will not raise their children the way their parent did or they like the way their parent raised them and they want to use the same skills. Thus, there are a few reasons why child-care classes are not required.
On the other hand, due to the popularity of working both parents these days, it is important to know how to balance work and parenting. To make it clear, as a busy parent, it is necessary to stay up-to-date with the lastest scientific finding because the past and present lifestyle including parenting hood are not similar anymore. Many studies have proved that the bonding between parent and children are radically on decline, it is contributed to inclination of busy parent. Every research is accurate and based on true stories reports by people experiences. Therefore, there is no error to attend and concentrate parenting classes to be equivalent with work and spending time with children.
To summerise, although parents raised without any support of parenting courses, due to changes of more working parents, I agree that child-care classes are valuable to harmonise between parenting and work to havea successful modern parenting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23103448276 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69566305138 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5461249765 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355746510881 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138388647302 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640894767218 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227976771606 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523626717745 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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