The given bar chart represents the possible causes of adult's decision to the further education, while, the pie chart illustrates the allocation of money for different education fields in percentages.
Overall, it is clear from the bar chart that adult have focused more on academic rather than other reasons, whereas individual share is higher than other share on the pie chart.
According to the data on the bar chart, the highest number of adults are interested in subject, that is 40% and followed by 38% of adult intended to receive their qualification. However, only 22% of adult find education is helpful for their current job. The most striking facts is that adult pursue education to improve prospects of promotion is equal to those who are preferred to enjoy their learning and studying of education at 20%. The least percentage of adult takes decushion to meet people.
From the pie chart, at a glance it is seen that almost half of money is planned to use for individual's choice, whereas, 35% of money is spent employer purpose, while , 25% of money for taxpayers.
- These days Parents are more concerned with their children s up bringing than before Taking care of the children seems necessary Child care training course for parents can be the best way to update them with this matter To what extent do you agree or disag 89
- College years are the best time in person's life. Do you agree or disagree with the statement 68
- In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. SOme people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years. But other people think everyone should have the freedom to choose where they work. 78
- TOEFL ESSAY: Many people believe it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position. 93
- In many countries good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities SOme people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years But other people think everyone should have the freedom to choose where they work Disc 91
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e on academic rather than other reasons, whereas individual share is higher than ...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'joins'' or 'join's'?
Suggestion: joins'; join's
.... The most striking facts is that adult joins education to improve prospects of promo...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...rospects of promotion is equal to those who are prefer to enjoy their learning and stud...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
... of promotion is equal to those who are prefer to enjoy their learning and studying of...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f money is spent employer purpose, while , 25% of money for taxpayers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95604395604 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6013913591 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598901098901 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7784571086 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279544385237 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132117583285 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059208885283 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166648500281 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693285896377 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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