Dear Omid,
I hope this letter finds you and your family well. I am writing this regarding the photos of our last month holiday that you have sent me recently. I am really grateful in the view of the fact that this holiday was one of the most memorable events I have ever had till now. These photos are precious to me since whenever i look at them, they remind me of the sweetest period i had with my friends.
Please accept my apology since i have not been in touch with you, and I didn’t write to you during the last month. I am working as an accountant in a big factory and we were at the end of the year, so i have been intensively busy with handling my tasks. Not only couldn’t i visit my parents, but i also wasn’t able to meet my girlfriend during this month.
I know that you have resented the fact that i was indifferent to you. Hence, I would like to invite you and your family to my house and stay here in Tehran for the next holidays. I appreciate if you inform all the friends that accompanied us in the last holidays to come over. Inevitably, we can duplicate those wonderful days here.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Milad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...holiday that you have sent me recently. I am really grateful in the view of the f...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'tilled'.
Suggestion: tilled
...e most memorable events I have ever had till now. These photos are precious to me si...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tilled'.
Suggestion: tilled
...e most memorable events I have ever had till now. These photos are precious to me si...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hotos are precious to me since whenever i look at them, they remind me of the swe...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., they remind me of the sweetest period i had with my friends. Please accept m...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ndling my tasks. Not only couldn't i visit my parents, but i also wasn'...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ow that you have resented the fact that i was indifferent to you. Hence, I would ...
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Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g from you. Yours sincerely, Milad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45220576986 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2804307002 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3846153846 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407504376348 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138504826732 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865045475179 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216185170987 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895898889681 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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