You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter.
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Ma'am,
Good day! I am Maria Judith Parayno, 23 years old. Now working as a Customer Sales Representative, her in Convergy's, branch MDC 100 Q. C. I wrote this letter because I need to take some time off for several week.
I started working here in our company since 3rd of July 2016 until now. Since then I did not have some issue with my attendance, as well as, I did not take any leave for the past months. So right now, I am asking for an approval to have some leave good for three weeks, and I wanted to take advantage to that this time. I am going to use my accruals to compensate the leaves that I plotted and will still be a paid leave. Written to our company hand book. However, I needed to have a time off, it is because summer is coming and I wanted to have a family bonding, as well as to have some fresh air away from the city. I will take my leave starting on 1st of April until 21st of April 2017.
Hopefully that my request will be approved. Thank you for your kind consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Maria Judith Parayno
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun week seems to be countable; consider using: 'several weeks'.
Suggestion: several weeks
...ecause I need to take some time off for several week. I started working here in our compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, still, then, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26368159204 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36220456265 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2361725259 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9230769231 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25003907449 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778448803935 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099687197384 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127347214561 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749947174151 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.