The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts provide information about the percentages of age groups in the population of two countries, namely Yemen and Italy, in 2000 and the expectation of those figures in 2050. It is also worth noting that while population of Italy is inclined to become older, Yemen tends to have a gold period in the labour force.
To specify, in case of Italy, after achieving 24.1% in 2000, the proportion of the retired people is anticipated to increase sharply at 42.3% and occupy the largest percentage in Italy’s population. In contrast, there will be a marked decrease in the percentage of Italian individual being from 15 to 59 years old in 2050, followed by the youngest group at 11.5%. With regard to Yemen, the year 2000 witnessed the age group from 0 to 14 years old make up the highest proportion at approximately a half of the population, pursued by the group including individuals from 15 to 59 years old and the oldest group at 46.3% and 3.6 % respectively. In 2050, the percentage of age group in a range 15 to 59 is expected to become the greatest in the Yemen’s population. This year also is predicted to see a decline in the proportion of both other age groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67942583732 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8672994081 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540669856459 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9496734505 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217832403844 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111526888806 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876532716081 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215449752488 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995395863376 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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