Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are some people who spend their entire life on doing monotony jobs, as they like to be stable without looking for change. While, others believe that change is the best way to go over better stages in life. So, i will explain in details the two perspecives by provding some examples to clarify the points as following;
On the one hand, people who believe change is a good thing to do to jump to another step a head. It is true. Hence, inconsistency in a ceratin condition with advance , it would help you to improve your life better either in your practical life or professional life. In addition, we can see in our naked eyes, that people who strive to change, they are really successful in managing their life professionally. For example, there is one guy his name was Feras, his profssion was a English teacher at one school in Jordan, he decided to change his life way by following his dream goals, and his wish was to become professor in such a university. As a result of this, he registered in the university of Jordan to continue his studies in master desgree, after finishing this level, he got promotion in his current position by offering him to be as pedagogical supervisor in the ministry. After that he registered again in the universty to continue his education in Phd degree with linguistics field. So after he had achieved high ranks between his colleagues, he got employed by the university itself, therefore, he left the ministry of education in the purpose to be as professor reaching his goal dream. As he told me that" it was step like turning point in his whole life". Whereas, there are other a lot of successful stories relates to other individuals in the real world. In that light, i tend to believe that changing is something useful in case if you have a certain goal in your mind.
On the second hand, doing a routine job, it will not change anything, you are going to be at same level " frozen" in the same position. So Individuals who follow consistency, they mostly suffer from getting higher positions in their professional life. Therefore, they do not have a look for the future, in this case, they will be exposed to failure. Through my experience, for example, sales executive matures, they keep stuck at the same position for a long time. So they do not search for a methods to support their background in sales. Whereas, there are many courses could be taken to achieve higher positions. Nowadays, there are sort of cousrses could be given by different institutions in the country to salesmen to develop their skills in sales, in case to get promoted in their current job, either in salary or position.
To sum up, we believe that change is a good way for better life, if it was well managed by people in advance. However, changing could affect others if it was not studied well. So, it will be like sailor who has set ship to sail in the sea without goal. As a result, it will lead to unwanted goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, in addition, sort of, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 24.0651302605 270% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 41.998997996 214% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 528.0 315.596192385 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63257575758 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61782326888 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503787878788 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 5.43587174349 423% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4227877866 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.916666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45833333333 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136131799528 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415088705012 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442416813815 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937234244786 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244477860751 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.