GENERAL TRAINING WRITING TASK 1You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter-Explain why you want to take time off work-Give details of the amount

Dear Mr Ganji,
I am Reza Ahmadi on of your employees at the designing site of the company. I am writing this letter regarding my requirement of some time off work.

Unfortunately, half an hour ago my wife called me and made me aware that my grandmother passed away last night. So, I should definitely attend in the funeral tomorrow. Also, it would be wise if I could leave today in the noon since I should get to my grandpa home and help my relatives performing task with regard to mourning ceremony.

As I mentioned former, I need to be free one day and half and I would inevitably commence my job the day after tomorrow.

In the light of the fact that I confined this incident with Mr vahidi one of my closest colleague. Not only did he assure me that he would handle my tasks today, but also he firmly promised that he would thoroughly take responsibility of my job even tomorrow. Therefore, I would appreciate if you confirm my leave at your earliest.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Reza Ahmadi

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5585106383 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66957163618 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8233444802 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143783525955 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067603055552 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865600372646 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871018290792 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102971734246 0.0580467560999 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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