Nowadays many young people are often spending their free time in a shopping center. This has a negative effect on the youth and the society to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Surveys depict that spending free time in shopping center has emerged as a favorite leisure activity among the youngster. I found this development as a negative influence which could have many adverse consequences on a life of youth and a culture of society.
Firstly, teenagers can easily be susceptible during this period of age. They follow any trend blindly which can end up in a loss of their valuable time. For example, young ones follow friends and spend their time behind gossiping, gaming, and shopping as an excuse of refreshing for a while. Moreover, they waste the hard earned money of their parents behind unnecessary expenses like clothing and grooming. Actually, during the education period of life, they do not require to follow fashion which can detach them from their sole objective of acquiring education. Lastly, to escape from the scolding of the parents on their misleading, children start telling lie about their whereabouts. Developing a habit of lying can sometimes catch them unavoidable circumstances that can cost high in future.
On the other hand, youth argues about their right of choosing a leisure activity to get relax from the pressure of studies. However, exploring hobbies can be the best solution rather ruining time behind mall culture. For instance, learning music, swimming or painting will not only help them to take a break from studies but also help in developing new skills. More to it, in this irresponsible environment of a shopping center, youngsters can be trapped into the bad habits like smoking, drinking, and drugging which can ruin generation and society as a whole.
To sum up, rather involving in activities like shopping and gossiping which cannot ripe a fruit, I strongly believe that youth should devote their valuable time in designing career and expanding the horizon of knowledge.
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Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67623284156 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8707094167 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178539476205 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06147093375 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435866734805 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118651696922 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506181324842 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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