«Prevention is better than cure»
Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures .
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
Since ancient time health was invaluable part of human being and encouraged by government to keep its citizens healthy. However does this way give coveted results ? I would say that governing body of the nation should pay due attention to preventative actions and health education instead .In this essay I will express my agreement to this point before a reasonable conclusion is drawn .
Firstly everybody knows that the best way to keep fit is doing regularly exercises and majority of people give their agreement, relating to this, the best way to live healthy is preventing unostentatious disease that later may cause to even worse affects .According to this, statistics illustrate the cost-effectiveness of treating the condition in the early stage ,rather than delaying until more expensive and prolonged treatment is necessary .One obvious point is that preventing disease in their early stages will save billions of dollars to the economy .Another important point I would like to mention in favor of preventative treatment is that preventing increases productivity ,enabling people more control over their body and health.
The authorities of many states are pondering under attempt of how to preserve its citizens` health. Childhood immunization programs and vaccination of the population became commonplace presently .Furthermore people are not only offered free medical care but are encouraged to look after their health and well being
In conclusion, I find it hard to cast doubt on essentialness of preventative treating .However I strongly believe that fighting against illnesses is better than taking awful medicines and bring economical benefit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, may, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52734375 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04217149474 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 242.797869751 49.4020404114 491% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.833333333 106.682146367 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.6666666667 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224432290655 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967565356161 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408122040712 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119040585856 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335724354705 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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