Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places.So you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? give reasons for your opinion.
There are many statements issued by some business and government that disallow smoking inside their office and in public area. For some points, I agree that it will bring a lot of negative impact than freeing smoke in public.
Generally, based on interview from smoker, smoking can release their stress. Many smoker smoke because they feel frustrate caused by economic and personal problem. Young smoker said that when they smoke, will look mature and be accepted by their group. Other said that they only try because feel curious but sometimes people who smoke as experiment usually become addicted. Woman smoker do not deny smoking can control their weight also. In opposite, regarding on all of benefit from smoking, it cannot be argue that smoking is one of the biggest trigger in causing disease even death for the smoker itself. Again, smoking is not only dangerous to active smokers but also people around them, or we call it, passive smoker. They will have serious negative health consequences also which caused by active smokers because they take a sip of smoke of cigarette. Also, the cost of passive smoker, it means that they got bad impact, they have to spend their money to control their health caused by active smoker. Not a few impacts in consequence of smoking even many babies die because of secondhand smoke that stick on people who kiss them. Once again, I agree that prohibition smoking in public area. In addition, with banning smoking in public can make healthy workplace and make our environment become cleaner from the cigarette butts that sometimes smoker dispose of their waste properly when they are in public places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t deny smoking can control their weight also. In opposite, regarding on all of benef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97463768116 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25908920518 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561594202899 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2539093711 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244001124185 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108455739132 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648435038664 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246110324063 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659299151713 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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