There has been a popular and interesting controversy in regards to people's lifestyle.Some people would like to remain unchanged for their entire life, while others in favor of changing. Since this matter is debatable, I shall enlighten both sides before deriving any conclusion over this fact.
On the one hand, those who are fond of devoting their life to a particular career tend to be in professional areas such as doctors and scientists. These jobs need chronic research and practice to acquire success. As a result, it is hardly to see a surgeon or a physicist abandoning their career and swi...
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Sentence: As a result, it is hardly to see a surgeon or a physicist abandoning their career and switch to other professionals.
Description: The fragment is hardly to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace hardly with adjective
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No. of Words: 291 350
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.04 0.07
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 291 350
No. of Characters: 1466 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.038 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.882 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.073 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.533 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.04 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5