Advertisements is the most important aspect that affect people’s decisions to buy a product. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Thesedays, companies spend huge amount of money amounts of money on advertising hoping that the money they invested will come back as a bigger profit. Some people are influenced by those fancy advertisements and make purchases, but this is not always the case.
Power of ads cannot be ignored as some people choose to buy something because an advertisement made a product look fascinating. It often talks people into thinking that buying a product that is advertised will bring them happiness and satisfaction. Also, many ads are informative as they often well explain the features and benefits of their product which helps people to decide to buy something.
However, I believe it is unfair to say that the real needs of the products are not thought of when people choose to pay for it. This is because people nowadays often make enough research about a product before they choose to spend money on it. Instead of buying a good straight after seeing it in an ad, many people search on the Internet and compare the price and functions of it with other similar products. This not only helps people to make good comparisons, but also gives them time to think if they need it so that they can make a rational choice. In addition, many purchases are made because people heard about something from word of mouth. For example, many women buy cosmetics even though they have never seen an ad about it, because they heard from their friends about how good they were.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that advertisements contribute a lot on sales of a product. However, people often make choices based on their needs, and not solely from an advertisement, despite ads becoming more increasingly powerful and influential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90753424658 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65135517702 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1968677747 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164110816834 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738937599363 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418791527992 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109414826902 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519408593567 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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