Any new technological development in the recent years is a boon or curse for the society in general?
Today, technology is used in day to day life people cannot think life without technology. The use of technology started when you wake up in the morning. Technology makes human life easy and save their time like Computer, mobile, and internet. In this essay, discuss the technology development is a boom or curse for the society.
Firstly, computer has many advantages which need human in daily life. It helps to store and transfer life. The computer is used for daily entertainment like watching movies, songs and for gaming. The computer is used in office for different condition to make it easy to work. Therefore, mobile helps to connect people and internet helps to get the information about anything. Thus, technology is the more boon then the curse for the society.
Secondly, technology helps the society and makes everything easy, but sometimes the access use of technology is curse for the society. Children use of access television and computer make their eyes weak it affects on their studies. Therefore, access use of technology divert the minds of user cannot concentrate of their work which is not well for them. Thus, technology is curse over boon to the society.
In the conclusion, technology is more boom than the curse for the society. It helps to make society worth living and easy. Life is dependent on technology nowadays. Therefore, it helps the development of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01716738197 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66428559418 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463519313305 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0047479046 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9444444444 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9444444444 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249666614442 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10002203904 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918073444748 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178901058749 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303574180327 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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