Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from?
I truly believe that success in life comes from taking risks and chances.And i can support my point of view by providing several reasons listed below.
First of all, if you are risky you take more chances and hence you have more opportunities to achieve your goal.As to half-hearted people, they tend to skip diverse facilities because of their careful planning.From my own experience, i have a testimony that it is a complete truth.I have a friend who is only twenty eight years old and because of his resolute traits he have achieved his target and have become a director of an extremely booming IT-company.He has never been afraid to do anything and he has taken all the chances that have appeared on his way.
And furthermore, you can not plan everything because life is full of multitude unpredictable things. Sometimes life gives you a potential that you have not planned. If you are a determined person you will take this possibility regardless.As a result, a person have one more chance to succeed in life.
But in all that fuss it is eay to get carried away. That is why a human-being have to act within reasonable limitsIt is important to be bold, but not overly adventurous.
To wrap everything up, there are chances in life that appear out of the blue and when you least expect them. But significantly, a person need to be willing to take that chance and as a result be elated by success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, as to, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66532258065 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80524341346 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.74846204 48.9658058833 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.555555556 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167623730434 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736981827178 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105068207968 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112340757725 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124344384876 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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