Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.
It is a very controversial utterance. People may argue with me but I truly believe that success in life comes from taking risks and chances.And i can support my point of view by providing several reasons listed below.
First of all, if you are risky you take more chances and hence you have more opportunities to achieve your goal.As to half-hearted people, they tend to skip diverse facilities because of their careful planning.From my own experience, i have a testimony that it is a complete truth.I have a friend who is only twenty eight years old and because of his resolute traits he have achieved his target and have become a director of an extremely booming IT-company.He has never been afraid to do anything and he has taken all the chances that have appeared on his way.
And furthermore, you can not plan everything because life is full of multitude unpredictable things. Sometimes life gives you a potential that you have not planned. If you are a determined person you will take this possibility regardless.As a result, a person have one more chance to succeed in life.
But in all that fuss it is eay to get carried away. That is why a human-being have to act within reasonable limitsIt is important to be bold, but not overly adventurous.
From the other side of the coin, it is can be insanely beneficial to have a strategy sometimes.Life loves people who plan their life.
To wrap everything up, there are chances in life that appear out of the blue and when you least expect them. But significantly, a person need to be willing to take that chance and as a result be elated by success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, as to, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67605633803 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84235855974 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.080660335 48.9658058833 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214371971636 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778191574766 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100059426933 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118295456243 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106178484678 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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