Compare yourself today and yourself five years ago.In what ways are you the same or different?Use specific examples to support your response
Everything is changing over time and i don't stay the same either. From my point of view, i have drastically changed.And i can support my opinion by providing several reasons listed below.
Initially, five years ago i was extremely self-conscious and vulnerable.I was so shy that i was even afraid to talk to someone and was insanely dependent on someone else's opinions. Now i am liberated and i can even say that i am intrepid. I no longer care about what other people think about me and say about me as i used to do.Furthermore, i do not stand in awe of expressing my own thoughts.
In addition to that, i used to be an indolent person.I had a tendency to waste my time by watching movies or listening to music.But presently i am a very determined human-being, who have an aim and will always try to achieve success. I know that nothing in this life comes effortlessly.And i am willing to put my shoulder to the wheel to achieve my target.For instance, just one year ago I did not know English, but now i am pretty fluent. And i reckon that it fully depicts my purposefulness.
On the other side of the coin, I have stayed the same kind-hearted girl, who is always ready to give a shoulder to cry on and to help people in complicated situations.
To wrap everything up, i guess that time is unstoppable and whether you like it or not it changes us significantly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i guess, i reckon, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.476 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03675879846 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2153634881 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840872633726 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028153868372 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172673598203 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0409144047764 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134679085638 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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