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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
It’s obvious that people everytime make changes in their lives. It can be: changing workplace, living house, going abroad or just make some differences in appearance. Of course, there are some positive and negative effects of this changes. Some of them can cause serious problems. So this essay will have a look to some kind of problems of making changes in everyday life. And also some useful solutions will be suggested.
First of all, I think the most popular change in people’s lives is going abroad for some needs. This can include both work or study. It’s obvious that sometimes the env...
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