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Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that they attained their goal mostly by luck. While I accept that luck does have an important role in helping people reach their target, I would argue that hard- work and determination are much more vital factors that contribute to the achievement of an individual.
One one hand, hard-work and determination play a critical key in achieving the target. For example, Jack Ma is a great image of man who works hard and very determinedly and never quit whatever he wants to do. he attains his success and become a billionaire after failing many times in the pass. Although he graduate...
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- The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011 The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one person households 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
...e to the achievement of an individual. One one hand, hard-work and determination play ...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y he or she may be. Conclusion, while a agree that luck is a factor to achive s...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y he or she may be. Conclusion, while a agree that luck is a factor to achive sucesss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59040590406 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50515732796 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7742352975 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130274256212 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572735691884 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536536476526 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097202509043 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036278929405 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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