Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents have the most important role in teaching of children. The trait and behavior of children are specially formed based on their parents’ treatments. Some people believes that parents want best for their child so they are the best teachers and others would disagree. In my view they are not always best teachers for two important reasons.
The main reason is that they make mistakes in their teachings because of their close emotional relationship with their child. Based on this relationship they limit their child and so child will not have all opportunity to learn as well as children which are free and can have adventure and explore surrounding environment. For example during university studies I had a friend which everyone was calling him Pat because he was clumsy. This situation was annoying him in a way that he decided to abandon university. When I asked him about his awkward behavior he explained that before university and when he was living with their parents, they treat him as a child so now he has low confidence which leads to his clumsy behavior. As you can see, his parents wrong treatment with their child and low ability of them in teaching him to be a self-confidently man, their son had faced trouble in society.
Another reason is that a lot of parents want that their children be like them or a person that they couldn’t become. In this situation parents treat their child according their own dreams and ignore child’s demands. The teaching way in a situation that parents demands are in conflict with their child, will not be an efficient way. For instance, my neighbor’s son destiny is a good illustration for this situation. About five years ago I had a neighbor with a son. His parents were dentist and although they had a lot knowledge about children education they were wanting their son also become a dentist. But son was in artistic mood and was wanting to be a musician. This conflict led to suicide of son when he was twenty years old dentistry student. This example shows that parents the wishes of parents can influence their teaching way and lead to a bad future for children.
In conclusion, I feel strongly that parents are the most important teacher in our lives and they can make a good future for their children if they learn how to treat and teach them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'always the best'.
Suggestion: always the best
...would disagree. In my view they are not always best teachers for two important reasons. ...
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Suggestion:
...st teachers for two important reasons. The main reason is that they make mistak...
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Message: You used an adverb ('self-confidently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('man') instead of another adjective.
...w ability of them in teaching him to be a self-confidently man, their son had faced trouble in society...
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...heir son had faced trouble in society. Another reason is that a lot of parents ...
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...knowledge about children education they were wanting their son also become a dentist. But so...
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...ntist. But son was in artistic mood and was wanting to be a musician. This conflict led to ...
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...and lead to a bad future for children. In conclusion, I feel strongly that pare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81094527363 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66348570209 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462686567164 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7011185542 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0925386907652 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380301843139 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304228139159 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650329128585 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278105052961 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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