the chart below shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of two air pollutants in four big cities in 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates, the amount of main air pollutants such as Sulphur dioxide and Dinitrous oxide in different area's of the world (Los angels, Calcutta, Beijing, and Mexico ) during the year of 2000. the levels are calculated as in miniium and maximum.
Overall, Mexico city was the most polluted region in the chart, there were both maximum sulphur dioxide and maximum dinitrous oxide reach at the peak level around 200 and 207 respectively. While, as compared to other cities Calcutta has all the given air pollutants in average level of below 60. Furthermore, Los angels shows the level of min SO2 as mere 1.
To begin with Mexico city and beijing, the max sulphur dioxide (SO2) has the 70 % advanced as in contrast with beijing ( Around 130) with 200. where as, max dinitrous oxide (N20) was 207 in mexico and only 56 in beijing. In addition, mexico carrying min dinitrous oxide in the range of 113, at the same time, beijing has only 14%. Likewise, min sulphur dioxide also low level in beijing such as 20, which rose to 80 in mexico.
In terms of air pollutants, Los angels was the lowest level in the chart. There was only max.dinitrous oxide shows at the highest level of 104 . As opposed to other cities, all other pollutants are below 40 only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, so, while, in addition, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71945701357 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41601266037 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515837104072 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8199022955 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9166666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189328021418 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081888372916 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563430170762 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140826247222 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725582127141 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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