The government provides various benefits to the people who are seeking job from long time. However, I believe that in return to these services provided by nation to these persons, they should be made to do community work for the betterment of not only society by the country as a whole.
The job-seekers can be utilized in different social works and social welfare to enhance the growth and development of the community. Voluntary work, such as teaching some underprivileged children, can not only do good to these children but also for the person educating them. This way, the individual will get to know the problems faced by various communities and villages and help the person to be more responsible towards his or her nation. Moreover, if the children will learn new things in life, this will also help in increasing the knowledge of the poverty-struck families which will further help in getting them jobs in the society.
In addition, by doing community service, people will get to know about their surroundings and will make better relationships with others in the society. This will help in creating trust and harmony among citizens of a country and increase the happiness quotient of the country. The unemployed people will get to know the importance of work and money in the daily life where thousands of people struggle to sustain their livelihood. Hence, building respect for the ones who wishes to work but are not able to due to different reasons.
To summarize, doing voluntary services in return of the benefits provided by the government, will be beneficial for both the individual and society as well. Therefore, these type of work will provide new avenues to the individual and better opportunity for the development of the country.
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,-tel 73
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion 70
- Few people devote their time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on individual and society in general. 84
- Should long term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community 86
- Some people think the air travel should be restricted because it causes environmental pollution. Do you agree or disagree? give your opinion and relevant examples. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01365187713 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77837920806 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515358361775 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0264224314 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199285728334 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777117808203 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608302739149 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136968735529 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802942145402 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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