Some people believe that the personal happiness is directly related with the economic success. Others argue that the happiness depends on completely other factors.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, some people argue that happiness is directly affected by financial success, while others consider entirely different reasons as its influence. Personally, I prefer the last mentioned argument.
It is undeniable that money provides a convenient way in processing any kind of transactions, and by possessing it in a particular number means any kind of things, which suit the price, could be purchased. Housing, good education for children, and basic needs could only be accomplished if someone has money. Emotionally, money also can satisfy one's desire such as hobbies, private car, well-k...
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