It is true that Internet has rapidly developed and had huge influences on every aspect of our lives in recent years. There remains some conversational conflicts between advocates and opponents who think both negatively and positively about impacts of Internet for us. I personally believe that its advantages outweigh drawbacks which vice versa also need taking into account.
On the one hand, it is indisputable to reject benefits with the use of . Firstly, there is a huge diversity of classified information, education or work related subjects in particular, available on online platform. People irrespective of ages might get access to those easily; in other words, online data are updated instantly and easy to be tracked via a few simple clicks without too much complexity or professional skills .Secondly, fast pace of Internet development has created a vast amount of apps provided to enhance both micron and large scale types of communication called social networking. Users regardless of geographic gap can be effortlessly accessible to information with each other within seconds compared to days or even months by conventional mailing means, like written lettering by post.
On the other hand, negative aspects of Internet still remain and should not be ignored despite its aforementioned positive impacts. At first, the more social networking communities expand, the more personal life which people publicize to the world are risky to be stolen by criminals. Crimes, especially financial ones, take advantage of both open and close information through hacking Internet banking platform to blackmail or thieve money by illegitimate identification on behalf of banking owners. Finally, people now a days spend more time on online communicating, chatting with their friends, which may/might turn themselves into isolated ones. In addition, social isolation resulting from the addiction of living in virtual online world rather than real world could make people become far distant, lack conversational skill which could lead to the shortage of self-confidence when those individuals have to face to each other in reality.
By way of conclusion, the advantages brought by Internet is incontrovertible, the negative aspects however are also unpredictable and need to be paid more attention by public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...opment has created a vast amount of apps provided to enhance both micron and larg...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...half of banking owners. Finally, people now a days spend more time on online communicating...
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Suggestion: a day; days
... of banking owners. Finally, people now a days spend more time on online communicating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in particular, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5323943662 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06242133635 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7049561107 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.076923077 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0551191022648 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195717228326 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238244201795 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0363999913853 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217340390345 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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