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Does travel help to promote understanding and communication between countries?
Last two decades world become a village. Technological advancement made travelling faster and easier. Travelling is playing an important role to learning various cultures and increasing good relationship among countries. This essay will discuss all the advantages and disadvantages of travelling.
Centuries ago, when inter regional traveling was almost impossible due to level of technology at that time which hardly enables it, almost every society lived only within their territory. As a result, they hardly knew or even did not know at all the existence of the other societies and other culture...
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Sentence: Last two decades world become a village.
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Travelling is playing an important role to learning various cultures and increasing good relationship among countries.
Suggestion: Travelling is playing an important role for learning various cultures and increasing good relationship among countries.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 283 350
No. of Characters: 1591 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.102 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.622 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.04 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.688 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.372 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
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