As the technology advances we get lots of choices to do all the things in many ways other than the traditional way. Similarly for studies, in future students may have choices of studying at home by using different technologies without going to school. I prefer studying at home with this new technologies which gives a new look to studies.
Firstly, studying at home gives you an environment which is free from any fear of teachers, tensions and competition between students etc. At home students can study any time when they are comfortable and free to study. There will be no obligation to go to school everyday early in the morning. This kind of schedule allows them to work on any part-time job if they want to do.
Secondly, Studying at home is cheaper than going to school, because you don't have to pay school fee, bus fee, no uniform, books and other school stuff which are needed in schools. So in that way we can save lots of money by studying at home.
Third reason for my preference is these new technologies are better audio-visual learning techniques which helps to learn and remember more things than school. Student can focus easily on the studies, because there is no crowded class or any other distraction in focusing in a lecture.
In summery, studying with this methods gives students a friendly atmosphere and they feel confident about what they are studying. Its very cost effective, so no need to worry about expenses. New technologies are giving students new ways to learn and understand things more clearly so they can perform well in the outside world.
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Sentence: Third reason for my preference is these new technologies are better audio-visual learning techniques which helps to learn and remember more things than school.
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