Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A goos sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
There are many qualities which are important for human being. Human being improves qualities by practicing it. An experience is the most important factor that plays role in developing qualities in human. I disagree with the statement that a good sense of human is one of the most importan human qualities.There are many other qualities that every person should posses.
Apart from a good sense of humor, a person should have quality of how to talk with other people and how to behave with them. A person should respect other people in a day to day life. Virat Kohli has a very good sense of humor but he doesn't know to behave with a people or how to talk with them. Most of the time he speaks abusive words to reporters,fans, and other players.
A person should be generous and kind. A person should always be ready to help other people. He/she understands other people's problems and try to solve them. Help other people in their bad situations. My father is always helpful to his friends and other family members. When my uncle was in period of a money crisis. My father helped him by giving a big amount of money. Bill gates is also best example of it. Every year he donates large amount of money to help people. The famous singer Akon illuminated one village by his own money.
A person should be honest and trustworthy . In the today's world, everyone is ready to do anything for their own benefits. He/she is also ready to cheat someone or break laws. The people always like people who is trustworthy and honest. Every year company fires many employees because there are not honest in their work. Last year in my company, one employee is fired because he was a part of corruption.
To conclude, a good sense of humor is not one of the most important human quality.Other qualities are more important than a good sense of humor which develops overall personality of a person and makes him/her a good person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63343108504 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47187247881 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469208211144 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5485451009 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.64 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16 5.45110844103 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172856824831 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439302952089 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660301526065 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110843550326 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826986855825 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.