Education is open to everybody regardless of sexes; consequently, male and female students should be treated equally in every aspects. Universities do not have any rights to discriminate students because of their gender; instead, they should serve to be an ideal environment where students can make the most of their abilities from the subjects of their choices.
There used to be a common belief that women were considered the weaker sex, thus only suitable for easy jobs that required no intellect and labor, while men were expected to do giant works such as science, technology, politicals; which led to the priority over men in the academic environment. However, women's achievements and efforts increasingly proved that prejudice to be completely wrong because both in the past and nowadays, they possess great abilities which can surpass men. For example, Marie Curie is a female scientist winning the Nobel prize twice, which was such an honor that many men dreamed for. Hillary Clinton is a powerful woman in the political field, she also used to be a well-known and admirable lawyer devoting herself to humanity.
Opening up opportunities for students from both sexes can bring in such advantages to the society they are living in, such as social development, human resource. For instance, Medicine used to be an exclusive subject for male only, which later engendered difficulties and controversies since the number of qualified doctors were not enough to serve the nation's needs. Later when it was open to women, many of the problems could be solved effectively; there has been a large quantity of well-trained female nurses, doctors who are willing to sacrifice their time, beauty to fulfill the mission of saving human's lives. Many of them have been awarded for their giant contribution and dedication to the country, the world we are living in.
In a nutshell, education rights should be available to everybody no matter what sex they belong to. If universities only concentrated on recruiting male students, that would be totally unfair to female ones having great potentials to achieve and succeed in their selected paths. Besides, that would do harm than more good to society since the human resource is not abundant enough to serve all country's needs for development.
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17520215633 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7606342153 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592991913747 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9691947755 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.545454545 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7272727273 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151144949567 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655612076269 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663328720849 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106770875044 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770429511229 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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