The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six subjects at a US university in 2011
The graph compares differences in the numbers of male and female students studying six subjects at a American university in 2011. In overall, the number of male students in most subjects was significant higher, especially in Mathematics, which 200 male involved while only less then 50 female took the course.
Two third of the students joined programming class were men while only around 60 female student studied this subject. There were 150 male students studied engineering and approximately 90 female students took this course. The disparity in psychology between two genders was trivial as 200 men joined the class and over 150 students were women.
In natural sciences, there were 200 students divided equally in each gender. The only subject with higher number of woman participation was linguistics, which over 100 students were female and around 70 male student joined the class.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...emale students studying six subjects at a American university in 2011. In overall...
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...which 200 male involved while only less then 50 female took the course. Two third ...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...ss were men while only around 60 female student studied this subject. There were 150 ma...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...students were female and around 70 male student joined the class.
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...round 70 male student joined the class.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29577464789 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65488287776 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2886495688 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346315469798 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200205115195 0.103423049105 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169878754056 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264848581075 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126092776697 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.