The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and sup

Leaders are chosen by the people to fulfill their task or duty assigned to them, may that be in any field like arts science, politics. Leaders represent the will of the people whom they lead. I agree with the statement that best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people they lead

It is the duty of a leader to lead his/her people to a path of progress. And in doing so he should be aware of the concerns and ideas of others. A leader should encourage feedback from the people because it helps to ascertain the exact problems or concerns people have. Taking feedback also helps a leader to solve problems because new ideas are being presented and a different outlook can provide a simple and efficient solution to a quandary.

Furthermore, encouraging feedback also helps to leader know how effective or successful are the plans or the ideas implemented by a leader. People's feedbacks are like responses from the critics, the leader can ascertain the exact report of what and where did the implemented ideas go wrong.

However, in the feedback, people may argue or criticize the decisions of the leader which may be accurate in that current situation. People criticizing and suggesting ideas do not know the actual depth of other connected factors to determine the decision of the leader.

In conclusion, a good leader should encourage feedback from the people he/she lead. It will solve more problems that create.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urage feedback from the people they lead It is the duty of a leader to lead his/h...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leads'.
Suggestion: leads
...courage feedback from the people he/she lead. It will solve more problems that creat...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91393442623 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57142983784 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495901639344 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.414907194 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255937420452 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109187537929 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938197833575 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157152332105 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070679110253 0.0667264976115 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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