Many people think that public celebrations (like National Holidays, festivals etc) are a waste of money and that is the government should spend those funds in a better way. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many people think that public celebrations (like National Holidays, festivals etc) are a waste of money and that is the government should spend those funds in a better way. Do you agree or disagree?

where public money goes is a topic of debate among the public. It is generally said that allocating public founds to holding celebrations, from traditional holidays to festivals, can be wastefulness, while it could be spend on some significant programmes. I firmly believe that it is better to be assigned to health centers and education system.

The most important requirement of every society is providing health centres. Building these clinics, people from all walks of life would sweep away their worry regarding some serious illnesses. Take South Africa into consideration; each year a large amount of money is spent on traditional celebrations; however, many people are threatened by some acute diseases such as HIV. If government of Africa had made a wise decision and erected more hospitals, the number of death tolls would probably reduce.

Another possible investment can be estabilishing educational centres. This is because erecting schools, language Institutes, and research organisations come with a staggering cost. such an unreported sums of money could not be affordable except by the government, whereas numerous donations can be assigned to the celebrations by people.

To sum up, I am of the opinion that a lion share of public money ought to be first allocated to education centres and health services, and then celebrations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
where public money goes is a topic of debate ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
where public money goes is a topic of debate ...
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Suggestion: Such
...anisations come with a staggering cost. such an unreported sums of money could not b...
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Line 6, column 201, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sum'?
Suggestion: sum
...h a staggering cost. such an unreported sums of money could not be affordable except...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, then, whereas, while, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40566037736 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07266337807 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2304988759 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.181818182 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108790573051 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389918702265 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337493151506 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629846741566 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246955937581 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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